the splendor of a sudden thought' Robert Browning
A moment
Traveling backwards on a screaming train,
I’m fiddling with my latest iphone
app and, looking to the left, a yellow sun has
risen up between a line of trees.
Heavenly light - in golden morning - stops
shadows on the right side of the train. I gawp;
feeling a glad splendor rising near my heart
but soon look down, restore technology – macbook, pixels, restart.
‘What a glory – this morning!” and it takes a stronger act of will
(stopping my little inner voice) to notice, once again, the Fall:
green and golden in my moments here – a sadness rises -
and my train heads westwards, onward, rushes.
Still rain
It’s raining in Scotland,
falling like tears
and the sky looks as gloomy
as a million years
and the Forth Bridge is standing
- a line in the grey -
with boats on the estuary
languid - today;
unraveling the traveling,
it’s seagulls that call
‘come on, you’re a moving
slow train - on a rail’
I’ve got furrows to plow -
purposeful - now.
Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAmazing imagery pouring like the beautiful rain :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading it.
that was really well written friend, being Scottish I appreciated that, bravo :)
ReplyDeleteThese are beautiful. Can feel the atmosphere in your descriptive language. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLovely, both poems transmit feeling.
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